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 Post subject: The Enigma of Space
PostPosted: Sun Oct 30, 2005 4:38 pm 
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There are times when life takes a turn
All the bridges that you had to burn
Take a good look at the sky
Don’t even try to wonder why
The enigma of space lies in the stars
Even if your world has to carry the scars
When life has given you a blow
Try not to cry
Where is your laughter?

The enigma of space let’s you be you
Even if there’s nothing you can do
Don’t even try to imagine what you can do
Don’t even try to imagine what you can’t see
Only let it be

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Good ones! :D

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 Post subject: Only You Can Be
PostPosted: Sat Jan 28, 2006 3:49 pm 
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Close your eyes and open your ears
Try not to listen to your fears
Even though there is silence
Every word can be heard

Your heart must be the doorway
Your eyes must be the staircases
Dreaming of a better life
A life what only you can approve

Never might be a long way to go
Never might be the word no
You might never know
How many lives have you ruined?
On your way to the top
Try and Stop

Think of what you lost
You are the boss of your own destiny
Only you can be what you want to be
The silence must be broken

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Nice! That could be titled, "Only You" or "Only You Can Be" or something like that. Anyway, very nice! :D

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 Post subject: To Break a Heart
PostPosted: Fri Feb 10, 2006 5:25 pm 
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To break a heart in two
to break a heart in million pieces
to break a heart it's true
you never seen their faces

I know the pain is deep
I know how much you cared
you will never know how much they shared
in a friendship you never saw

To be a witness of pain
what have you gained
even I don't want to know the truth
then who can I trust?

To break a heart in two
to break a heart in million pieces
to break a heart it's true
you're never seen their faces
inside the mirror of time

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:thumbsup :heart Nice poem! :D

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 Post subject: Hello Stranger
PostPosted: Sat Feb 18, 2006 2:38 pm 
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For a while I denied myself
Knowing that I am unimportant
Hello stranger is what my heart said
It is I that has won the bet

I tried hard to find my calling
Looked high and low, but to nothing
I even tried to quit
Hello stranger, do not fear
Keep your heart and head clear

I’m not trying to justify my actions
I just want my love to come
For a long time I denied it
I even cried
Hello stranger, your heart is broken

I’m not only kidding myself
It is as if I am living in a loop
A circle that seemed to be unbroken
Only tears seemed to flow
Hello stranger look in the mirror

Look into your eyes
What do you see?
I see pain and hurt
That is what my heart cried
Hello stranger break through that cocoon
You are the only one that matters!

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 Post subject: World2World
PostPosted: Sat Feb 18, 2006 4:07 pm 
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I decided to post two poems at once. I hope you guys like it
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You stood at the gateway
wondering if you knew the place
where to now?
travelling from world 2world

Did you think this would be the one?
if you could only stay afloat
this world is beginning to end
with nothing more to offer
that's why you travel
from world 2world

The pain could only be bareble
but what if you didn't survive?
the world is nothing more than a planet
a planet with a lot of problems

The reason life is going on
world 2world that's the one
the one place I have to be
is travelling from world 2world

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Beautiful poems, both of them! :thumbsup

I like the line: "You are the only one that matters" from the first one.

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 Post subject: Broken Moon
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Broken Moon
As I look up into the sky
I see the heartache in your eye
The centuries took its toll
Broke your body and now it isn’t whole

Broken moon, you look as if you cry
You see the love’s quarrel in your perfect eye
You were there from the first day of love’s arrival
I can only say that love is strife of your mortal lives

Broken moon, please don’t cry over our heartache
We can only take as much as what the world gave us
I’m not the one to blame
Yet I feel all the shame
I can’t love because love’s hour hasn’t come
Broken moon, what have I done?

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Very nice! Heartfelt! :heart

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 Post subject: Destined to Fail
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I looked at the stars
Wondering if it would be far
Every where I ever go
It seemed like I’m destined to fail

My life has been a roller coaster ride
Even if I’m the one at the wheel
Where could I ever find the answers?
To all the questions of the world

Every one has to create their destiny
But where could you find it?
Destiny has its own road to take
So much is at stake
So I’m destined to fail

The stars told me that I’m the one
But the wind told me I don’t belong
Where to now?
Where can I go from here?
Too much questions
Not enough answers to find

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Awwww... Very nicely done! I especially liked these two lines:

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The stars told me that I’m the one
But the wind told me I don’t belong


It's sort of bittersweet but beautiful. :D

In college, I wrote a song with a remarkably similar theme, but maybe not as poetic. I'm going to post it on my thread so you can see. It was called "Where Is don Quijote?"

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Very emotional work. Like them all but especially 'Hello Stranger'

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 Post subject: Two Doors
PostPosted: Wed May 17, 2006 5:26 am 
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Two doors in world of dreams
One seems to be forever
Other is just an illusion
Where could they lead?

I’ve tried to picture a reality
A reality out of dreams, but
I’ve gained nothing
A stubborn heart is all that I have

Two doors separated by a curtain
A curtain of tears
Yet in all of my life
I’ve gained nothing, but fear

Fear for an unknown future
Knowing that everything has been destroyed
Your life is just a lie
All you can say is good-bye

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Oh very nice. It speaks to me of disappointment, disillusionment, pain, loss, fear and hopelessness and yet the'stubborn heart' remains speaking of a small glimmer of hope amidst it all.

Bravo!

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 Post subject: In Space we're alone
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We looked at the stars
And wondered where we are
Trying to find a place to call our own
But in space we are alone

I tried to imagine the dreams into reality
I even tried to find my own world
Space was the only thing I could think of
But let me tell you this
I find space as an escape route

People tried hard to let me think of something else
Yet the couldn’t succeed
The seed of imagination was sowed in my heart
Space became a part of me

Million miles in the darkness of space
We can find our own way
Even if they laugh at you
There can be only one thing you can do
Tell them that in space we’re alone

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I recognize that first one from your story! I like it! :D And the second one is very interesting, too. It seems to combine the idea of being drawn to the stars with the idea of being together alone, the floating in space part. Anyway, very nice! :thumbsup

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 Post subject: Beyond the Crooked Sky
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I never thought about anything
Life has never been kind to me
When the sun broke through the mountain
You know that it is beyond the crooked sky

Where did you think life took me?
I never understood the difference between dreams or reality
Reality is just illusions of never understanding fate of your being…
Beyond the crooked sky
You’ll find the golden hope
Hope of being part of life

The sun broke through my mountain of hope
Hope for a better future for myself
That is why I can only say
When the sun broke through your mountain of hope
You’ll know then that it is beyond the crooked sky

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Very nice! I love the imagery! :heart

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